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Friday, December 30, 2011

Onto Deeper Waters

Here's a little something I wrote during math. Enjoy!

Onto Deeper Waters
I’ve got these currents of words
Streaming through my head
My English teacher calls it poetry
But I know it’s something more
Because the warmth is so strong I find its gravity pulling me to the floor
And for a mere second the reasons for my existence are sure
For every time I let these creeks of words drip onto a page
I feel saved
And brave
I’m dancing in the sunshine
Everything is just fine
I don’t feel a need to rewind
All those words that spilled from my peach lips
Instead of my wrinkled fingertips
Because I know that these poems
Can polish the jagged angles and broken glass
That can sometimes define the past
And these poems are something that will last
And although I could never run fast
The instant I write this
I can fly
I can feel
All the bliss
That so many miss
That this life has to offer
So I swim in these streams
Of poetry rushing through the boulders of my body
And I know that in these translucent warm waters
I will never drown
Because all alone inside the waters of my mind
I am finally found
And one day I’m going to find the ocean
Purify my soul in the waves’ commotion
Listen to my heartbeat’s true sound
I will no longer flee but
Follow that urge
And submerge
And be free
And finally see
That the essence rippling through this sea
Is the real me.

Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Holiday Cheer and Movie Fear

It is holiday season once again, and that means traditions shall be brought back to life. As your typical Long Island jew, I continued my Christmas Day custom of visiting the movies. I love it, and usually the movies this time of year are great. This year I saw with my mother The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo.
The movie had a complex brillant plot along with terrific character development, but man was it brutal. I have never seen such graphic sexual and physical violence in my existence. At times it seemed as if it wasn't even trully needed. SPOILER ALERT: the main character was viciously raped on screen, and it actually wasn't related to the larger plot, just for character development.
This spawned a question to you underaged voices:

To get attention to one's work, is brutal graphic violence needed? Or should the craft speak for itself?

I also recently saw Hugo, Martin Scorsece's newest film. He is best known for violent works like The Godfather but this movie was rated PG. It was not a children's movie. It had a depth and beauty only an adult can enjoy. By doing this, leaving out unnecessary curses and violence, did Sorsece sacrifice attention, or did he create a film strong enough to shine without the soot?

(write about it)

Thursday, December 22, 2011

Poemas no son en Ingles.

Hello my lovely underage readers! So for my Spanish class, I had to write a poem, something beautiful, profound, insightful, and not in English. I wanted to impress my teacher so desperately, but felt caged within the patterns of a language I that isn't my own (yet). This poem is in Spanish, and is about my frustration and deep desire to be able to one day express my self in Latino words.
I know plenty of my readers don't speak Spanish, and my maestra would cringe at the suggestion, but google translate?

Para Ahora

Lo siento, pero no me gusta español
La lengua es bella, como las arrugas de las hojas caídas
Y mis palabras probamente no valen la pena
Pero es verdad—no me gusta Español
Porque en clase yo soy la chica con canicas en su boca
Yo no puedo sacar buenas notas
Y los tiempos nosotros tenemos conversaciones
Mi voz he huido
Un oración yo necesito crear es una crucigrama
Un laberinto de gramar
Yo soy atrapado en estos crecimientos
Solamente una letra es un acosamiento
Y mi boca baila sin mi consiento
En dos minutos yo tengo un tango de las palabras españoles en mi cabeza y la música ingles en mi corazón
Mientras los otros estudiantes son artistas del idioma
Yo siempre estoy diciendo que
“La pluma es mi pasión”
 Pero cuando yo escribo en español yo necesito un teléfono
Para llamar el medico de fuegos
Porque antes yo puedo hablar
Yo he perdido el calor de mi alma
Yo trato fumar partes de mi exaltación
Pero las palabras y poemas ya no están con yo
Yo no quiero hablar
Yo quiero decir
Decir de polémicas
Corruptas sistemas
Todas las temas
Cuando la luz en la vida esta enfermo
Lirios que florecen en veranos
Porque inmigrantes necesitamos
Combatir la ley por anos
Porque yo no tengo un padre desde mi dos cumpleaños
Manos de un bebe alcanzan para su madre
Manos de una maestra alcanzan a sus estudiantes
Mis manos alcanzan para tu por esta poema
Si ellos pudiera
Cuando yo hablaba con Dora y Diego
No me preocupe con dar comida a mi fuego
Mi boca era más que un espacio negro
 En Ingles las palabras son mi libertad
Todas mis emociones y sueños son verdad
Yo no puedo tener este sentimiento “sad”
El tren de mis palabras es en ingles
Y lo es porque yo escribiré otra vez
No me gusta español
Porque yo necesito mostrar la poderosa
De mi boca
Y yo sé que
Yo soy demasiado joven para votar
Pero con el idioma
Mis ideas son tuyas
Por el momento yo hablo
Mi acento atropellar el carro de mis crecimientos
Yo tengo miedo

Pero yo soy aquí
A tiempo español es más fuerte que mí
Pero yo combato las dudas
Mis poemas son orgullosos
Y me encantan estas cosas
Los momentos
Cuando mis palabras trae tu por vendadas
Yo tengo la sangre de mis antepasadas
La llama de Poe, Angelo, y Langston Hughes
Yo soy un parte de sus
Y aquí esta un
Yo estoy diciendo en español
Mi voz no es fea o demasiado rápida
Es solamente yo
Me gusta español
Pero español no le gusta yo
Para ahora, ¿no?
--Ariel Sobel

Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Time to See Writing Outside of my Laptop...

Hey everyone! What a week! First a colossal thank you to all those who liked Underage Voices on Facebook! Your support means a lot in the quest to get my internet child off the ground. 

I honestly believe that poetry and expression has rescued me--from the tragedies I have encountered and many dimensions of emotions within myself.My favorite medium is slam poetry, a form of poetry that is written to be spoken aloud. This style does not just encourage sharing of artists work, but stitches it in its foundation.

I recently discovered I am not the only one with such a passion for this style. Global Writes, a Bronx-based nonprofit organization helps students grow through live slam poetry competitions. By emulating some of my favorite and most renown modern slam poets, these children let writing enter their souls and develop a sense of expression, pride, and confidence. (Check out the video.) Who thinks your school needs a slam team? I certainly do!

Sunday, December 18, 2011

Austin Chin and Underage Perceptions of Beauty

It is my honor to share with you a drawing by Austin Chin, a junior at Syosset High School.
This was Austin's response to a prompt: draw something ugly yet find something beautiful about it. I think he has succeeded! Although this man may look feeble and weak, something in his eyes have an untold mystery and beauty.

When speaking of his lovely work, this is what Mr. Chin said:

 Beauty is of course, a subjective topic; everyone will have his or her own opinion of what is truly "beautiful". But regardless of these beliefs, it seems possible to find beauty in almost everything - one simply needs to search for it.

Talented and profound! So readers, what is your perception of beauty? Don't just think, create: draw something beautiful to you, write about the blessings in your life, or even just snap a photo of it. Then submit so we can share the beauty with everyone. 

Monday, December 12, 2011

High Schoolecstasy

High Schoolecstasy
There's this drug I've been taking
It makes my body pulse with adrenaline and sometimes fear
My blood quivers in my veins
It makes my body smell
It's so easy to see everyone is taking it at my school
Because they all host the scent of computer paper, pencil sharpeners, and sweat
When I take it I get paranoid too.
I feel like there's some higher power watching everything I do
the grades I make
the clubs I'm in
the awards I win
and it’s not god, it’s like a school of watchers checking to see if I'm good enough
The drug gives me other feelings
the feeling of being the gopher in wack-a-mole
and being smacked down with the pressure
and it aches and burns and I just feel like I'm going to die
but I go in and take the drug the next day.
I'm so addicted.
And I hate it.
I hate the fear, the grade swings, looking at my classmates like right here, right now we're competing
to survive
and you know what they say about the fittest.
My head aches and I stay up all night
tossing and turning in algebra and world economics
and in the morning I'm incomplete
I'm missing something
and it hurts so bad taking it
I feel like a soulless monster skulking among the shadows
but I've lost all control
it's no longer me, it's a monster rolling around in research papers and reading
so lost with cloudy eyes
like a snake ready to feed upon anyone.
But I try to stop.
I withdraw for around two months.
The symptoms aren't so bad,
playing, sunshine, friends
But it's unstoppable; I am a slave to the drug
And year after year I relapse.
But some people never quit
they are the ones who never withdraw and during the months I relax they continue
studying in dark rooms filled with SAT posters
Eyes cloudy with the drug devouring all light
leaving behind an abyss of who was once someone who did a sport for fun
Or just liked to help people
But now their motives have roamed across the crevices of their minds.
Leaving behind this substance
This drug
Controlling us all.

Sunday, December 11, 2011

Sleeping Beauty

Last night I was lucky enough to go into Little Italy to celebrate my grandmother's 83rd birthday. It was a phenomenal evening bursting with food, culture, and smiles. In lieu of that wonderful event, here is a photo I took of her while dozing off. Here's your challenge: take a photo of someone you love doing ordinary things and look for the beauty in it.

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Hands are Beauty

Hands Are Beauty
Hands are beauty
The ten elegant oaks rising from the wrinkled plateau
The fingernails, chiseled or curved, lined with nervous imprints of teeth
Dirt hiding under the cave of keratin
Dirt collected beneath a sapling
Or creating a masterpiece
Hands stroking paint across an empty space, thrusting color upon a crisp canvas
Hands doodling new unspoken thoughts along shimmering crystals on the window of an antique car
Hands tossing a peach kiss through the air
A sister’s hands braiding hair, coiling the strands with gentle affection and admiration
Hands coalescing to make the noise
The clatter of pride, power, and acknowledgement
The sound every individual craves, the accolade that cannot be transcribed on paper
Born by beautiful palms
Merely crashing against each other like furious waves
The soft hands of a mother holding her child, her soul kindled with the baby’s fresh light
A surgeon’s hands protecting vigor, aware the recipient will wither without the eleventh finger 
The warmth of the icy metallic scalpel
The hands of a G-d reaching down to us, instructing us to be more than animals but the earth’s keepers
Hands holding hands
The sensation holding onto my scarred skin
Holding each other, holding strength and resilience
Colossal hands, fragile ones, some colorless, other tinted
Hands blooming with youth and caving inward with age
All equal
All a sea of the remarkable, the captivating, the incomprehensible yet still familiar
The hands of the agrarian sewing a tree into the soil
The hands modern industrialist enjoying the harvest of that tree
The hands of a young voice grasping a pencil 
Just beginning to write, but ready to speak
The hands of the hearing impaired ready to shout
The hands of someone somewhere twisting a steel key to open the doorway to a world of creativity
The hands of a clock mumbling that the time we have is leaving, better revel in while we can
Hands scrubbing the soul clean, restoring our innate purity and acceptance 
My hands 
My hands trying to make sense of it all
Of why I am here and when will the world finally see
That there is beauty blossoming from the arms of every soul
That we all can harness it
That we all are the masters of an unnaturally organic force
My hands pressing down letters and syllables and the passion that bursts through my every cell and vessel
My underage hands writing this poem.

Monday, December 5, 2011

Whats goin on..

This video is a beautiful expression of an underaged voice. No matter what kind of pain we are enduring, we can be rescued by sharing our voice with the world.
Love to all those voices who are yet to be heard.


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